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Okay, I’ve been thinking about your Antelope Canyon idea a little more 😂

I actually think the water dragon part is way more interesting if the dragon isn’t simply the “big magical creature” everyone has to defeat.

Like... what if the dragon is the reason the two kingdoms have been fighting over the water in the first place, but neither side actually understands what they’re messing with?

That would make the girl hearing the canyon almost more important than having some huge final battle. She could slowly realize that the “water crisis” everyone has been arguing about is actually a symptom of something much older.

I’d probably lean into that mystery before revealing the dragon too early

But now I’m curious... when you first came up with this idea, did the water conflict come first, or did you imagine the canyon/dragon first and build the politics around it?

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